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» Poem: cut cut cut(kahno my sweet)
cut cut cut(kahno my sweet)
written by i_love_sandy
07:18 PM 9/25/04
kahno my love
cut cut cut
send me up above
cut cut cut
dont throw me over
cut cut cut
i dont want to be sober
cut cut cut
i'm going to hell
cut cut cut
were my pain swells
cut cut cut
just remember me
cut cut cut
when i'm free
cut cut cut
remember me as a friend
cut cut cut
i am going to be dead


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i want to die.................no-one cares. i know you dont care,sandy...thanx for letting me fall

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (9-25-2004 - 07:53 PM)
hun your poetry is getting worse... and the only reason your falling is because you jumped and you're refusing to get help! just piss off OK?

by Morbid Angel (9-25-2004 - 07:55 PM)
I've tried talking to you and I've explained everything to you but you don't seem to realise. I know you won't do any of this, is you would you'd be dead by now x

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