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» Poem: i'm putting my love on ice
i'm putting my love on ice
written by i_love_sandy
07:31 PM 9/25/04
i'm totally giving up now
i'm giving up my love now
maybe i'll put my love on ice
kill myself, that'd be nice
maybe i should do it now
hurt myself and i know you'll be proud
mister sandy can you answer my question
do u love her not only as a friend
well ya do so i'll leave now
dont you think i'm bound tot react now
maybe i'll put my love on ice
kill myself, yes that would be nice


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
you get it sandy. you love cass dont u..more than a friend...got some great news from my demon......i am never going to love again.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Morbid Angel (9-25-2004 - 07:49 PM)
:(

by Trapezium (9-25-2004 - 07:55 PM)
why kill yourself? you've been through s much alreayd... a little bit of green eyed monster shouldn't be enough to kill such a strong person... I don't hate you... I just don't unhderstand why you're going to such extremes to get me back... I'm not having it

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