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» Poem: Deaths obstacles.
Deaths obstacles.
written by Lovely_Suicide
01:36 AM 9/27/04
My tears raining
My pain flowing
My blood is running
Down the drain.

Slit wrists
Great big nooses
Fallen hoops
Obstacles ahead.

My legs are broken
Cuts and bruises
My mind is blank
Finally over deaths obstacles.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
for some reason all my poems are even stupider today hmmm i wonder why....hmmmm

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (9-27-2004 - 01:49 AM)
they aren't stupid, and it's unfair of u to think so. i like ur poems.

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