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Whip of torture
written by Lovely_Suicide
05:54 AM 9/28/04
Whacking a black whip against my chest
Two giant cuts across my chest
Slashing it at me over and over
Laughing at my trapped body against this wall
Trapped in chains
You laugh your manic laugh
Tears rolling down my bloody cheeks
Slashing it over and over me
Laughing and laughing
Not caring how i'm feeling
Spitting in my face
Capturing me inside your whip
Tightening it around me
Making my gasp for air
My cheeks going blue
But you still tighten it
I start to go limp
My breathing starts to slow down
But then you grab your whip back
Making me breath again
Not giving me the satisfaction of death
Taking my last breath within your hand
Only throwing it away when you want me dead
Making me suffer within your hands
Turning my body into a bloody wreck
Swelling bruises and bleeding cuts everywhere
While i'm trapped in here
Facing the torture you give me
Only being let out when you let me
You the tormentor
Classy whip to hurt me
Made out of all tings sharp
And thats when i start to realise
There's more then you whipping me
It's everybody
Taking their turn with the whip of torture
Confusing me
Making me turn to someone who i thought wasn't like them
But theni realize they are
That everybody is
Everybody wants to hurt me.


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