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Never had a boyfriend
written by Lovely_Suicide04:34 AM 9/29/04I've never had a boyfriend
Never had a hug
Never had the chance to look into some guy's eyes and say i love you
I've never felt a warm embrace
Or a soft caress
Never been wrapped up in a cocoon all safe and warm
I don't think i'll ever get married
Feel loved
Get to talk to a guy properly
Without stattering and feeling shy and scared
I'll never know what its like to full in love properly
When the other person actually care
I know no one undedstands
Dosn't really care
That i'll never get to fall in love. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
People properly dont undertsand my poems about heart break etc but its actually cause i cared so much and i had the biggest crush and i dont know whats wrong with me stuff happened im not sure if im ready to write about that yet it still hurts like hell:(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Mars_Phoenix (9-29-2004 - 03:26 PM)
| that was really good. You have guts writing about that, really personal and deep. |
by bloodyfairy (9-29-2004 - 10:30 PM)
| i think its good
it held my attention better than some poems like this |
by (anonymous) (9-30-2004 - 04:41 PM)
| it's okay but it will be betterif it made more sence. |
by Lovely_Suicide (10-2-2004 - 11:12 AM)
| it does make sense maybe ur so dumb that u cant see wat i mean ha? your pathetic |
by (anonymous) (10-24-2004 - 03:12 AM)
| i really love ur poems and this one about u never having a boyfriend is sad....but i had to say u r not alone...i have never had a bf either,never been loved, or even kissed, never been huged, never held hands ....i am alone and i just wanted to say, from one poem to another, u r very talented! |
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