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The angel's message
written by The grey raven08:40 PM 9/29/04An angel with a flaming sword
stood before me and said
do not underestimate life
one day you will be dead
I wondered what he meant by this
he sounded serious
confused I made my way back home
what he said was curious
My life then on became so bad
I went and slit my wrist
I floated into darkness
it was for the best
now I wander round, a lost soul
Doomed to roam the earth
I had took my own life
I can't take back my death |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a good example of the random stuff that comes out of my head.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by yomamma (9-29-2004 - 10:01 PM)
| wow our poem just about took my breath away. i like the first part about the angel. Very good poem. keep up the good work |
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