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» Poem: War of pain
War of pain
written by Lovely_Suicide
04:36 AM 9/30/04
A landfield with blood
Mines ready to explode
Guns ready to fire
Blood all over the grass

One body lays in the middle
Bleeding badly
Everyone surrounded
Guns about to fire

A weak cry for help is ignored
They all fire at her
But yet she stays alive
Over come with agony

They keep on firing over and over
Pleased as she wallows with agony
They throw knives and bombs
Making sure they cause her the most pain

Body full of opened wounds
Holes all over
Blood gushing more severly from her body
The ground begins to flood with blood

Running off the go
Leaving her alone
Swallowed up by agony
Squirming and twitching as it all gets worse

The landfield seems to explode all at once
Blowing her up into small bits
The smoke clears
There she lays all in little bits but still alive.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
oh no look it sux so much:(

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by Glittery Blood (10-2-2004 - 02:04 AM)
thats impossible

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