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» Poem: Dear Jesus, Are you listen?
Dear Jesus, Are you listen?
written by Open_Until_4Am
01:05 AM 10/4/04
Dear Jesus.
What is this?
Can this be happening.
Why are you letting all the good things in life pass right on by?
I'm losing all my self control.
There's nothing more to what I'm saying.
GOD damnit Jesus are you listen.
I'm screaming in your face.
Oh can you hear.
No one will ever tell me to shut up.
I'm always right.
No No you'll never learn.
Can't go back undo the un-touch able.
Used to cut away the pain.
Now that just seems to be so lame.
Inside the bath where I lay.
Trying to remember yesterday.
Who are you?
Where are you from??
Jesus was his name.
Told me to hold on.
Wow that's sounds like some cheese song!
I remember the look he had.
I swear to god he could have been a rock star.
But how could that be?
He shined so bright.
The next night I fell a sleep on the floor again.
Jesus came to me.
Hey said why are you always down?
I told him maybe if he had stuck around.
and Had made my life easier.
I would have believed in him.
So I told him.
But you never can and you never did.
I always get the shit of things.
Then he told me to stop whining.
He felt me thinking what the hell is wrong with me.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
HahAha...Don't ask..I just wrote it.No thought put into it.

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by wingsbeenbroken13 (10-4-2004 - 01:07 AM)
it's great it really sums things up...

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