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Last poem
written by Lovely_Suicide
07:14 AM 10/4/04
Kick and abused
Is how everyones made me feel
Made me feel so used
What's the deal?

Saying none of this makes sense
Not caring that maybe you've got it wrong
That maybe it does make sense but im to dense
To make anything sound right and it's because i dont belong

I've tried to hide it all
The hurt i get when someone says my poems dont make sense
I want someone to hear my call
That there is a meaning you just have to look for it beyond the fence

It's up to you
To abuse
And say everything i write is untrue
And leave me with a bruise.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
alot of people lately have been saying my poems dont make sense like war of pain and never had a boyfriend and another one well its not just it dosnt make sense no clearly understands my poems or maybe they just dont want to so anyway im thinking of stopping writing poetry and i did say -THINKING-

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by never_knowing (10-4-2004 - 05:24 PM)
All your poems make sence to me!! I love your poems!!

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