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» Poem: Guilt after killing you
Guilt after killing you
written by Lovely_Suicide
05:37 AM 10/6/04
I shot you once before
Right at your door
I saw you laying in blood
The guilt rushed back to me like a flood

Now i'm standing before you again
Not feeling sane
Holding this gun at your chest
Not hearing you protest

BANG, BANG
Your blood spluttering on me
BANG, BANG
And from the crime spot i flee

Gunned you down in your home
Ran that gun threw you like a comb
Now im covered in blood
But it feels to much like mud

Killed that pain you kept giving
I wasn't going to be forgiving
But now i feel bad
I feel so mad

BANG, BANG
I shot you with my sin
BANG, BANG
I shot away that grin

Drow.ing in self guilt
Covering me like a quilt
Got away my pain
But gave myself another thicker then rain

I fell to my knees
Feeling your disease
I picked up that gun
And i know i hadn't won

BANG, BANG
Im laying here dead
BANG, BANG
Got rid of the sin that was thicker then thread.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it started out with an idea from my story buit changed cause this guy died on the beahcand it was different i deicded t relate it to me eve nthough i wouldt kill anyone or even think of doing it if i hate someone i usually just get really mad you can make sense of it im sure or maybe not i can but i have my own meaning for alot of my poems im not sure if everyone else has the same ideas as me of the meaning.
-Jessica-

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