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» Poem: Today reminds me of you
Today reminds me of you
written by Lovely_Suicide
06:11 AM 10/6/04
Today reminds me of you
The last day i saw you
It was like this
Sunny and hot

Today reminds me of you
The sadness i felt that it would be the eternal goodbye
It was like this
Tears stuck inside

Today reminds me of you
The longing emptiness i wanted to be filled
It was like this
Empty and sad

Today reminds me of you
The first and only guy i ever loved
The only guy i ever wanted
But never felt the same

Today reminds me of you
Remebering your sweet caring face
Wishing to see it for eternity
And never have to let go

Today reminds me of you
The sadness i'm feeling that i never got to say i was sorry
For being a nuisance
For chasing you around with messages all the time

Today reminds me of you
The last ray of sunshine i saw threw my world of gray
The goodbye i had to finalize
And knew i'd never forget.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i last saw this guy in 2001 i miss Rhyss *crys*

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» Comments / Feedback
by CLC_RockGirl (10-6-2004 - 02:05 PM)
I love your poem rock on keep it up

by NirvanaGirl23 (10-6-2004 - 10:51 PM)
great poem, dont worry, you will find someone else :-D keep up the good work,

by moondemonsurferpunk (10-7-2004 - 04:01 AM)
nice. but someone else will come for you when the time is right. theyll love your deep soul.

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