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» Poem: Our love is failing
Our love is failing
written by NirvanaGirl23
06:53 PM 10/6/04
Brother leave me dying
Father help me falling
Mother never failing
My love is always failing

Shattered dreams of happiness
come back to me with brokeness
My face is turning pale,
You can see it, eatting me away inside.
like cancer, i cant save myself.

no ones by my side,
everyone has left me, theres nothing they can do
they turned and ran, because they couldnt bear to see this pain anymore.

so leave me here to die, theres nothing you can do
watch it eat me away, until i die for you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dunno, kinda a weird poem, just came to mind. LEAVE COMMENTS PLEASE!

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by crazybitch (10-6-2004 - 07:07 PM)
very good. all there is 2 say

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