» Poem: Drounding.. |
Drounding..
written by NirvanaGirl2309:33 PM 10/8/04As the knife drops to the floor
i remember the pain of the night before.
i cried out for help but no one believed me,
so i put on a smile and decieved thee.
The rest of my life i wasnt the same,
i was happy go lucky..
Miss Insane.
I put on a smile, did everything right.
But in the back of my mind,
was fight..fight..fight.
One day it stopped, the madness began
i put on a fight, and let you know when.
i yelled and i screamed, made you take it all in.
But you didn't believe me..
So i dround in my sin. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by vampire_princess (10-8-2004 - 10:43 PM)
WOW! that was awesome! I love it!......it captured so much feeling....i can really relate.....great poem! |
by fuzzypunkhat (10-9-2004 - 03:37 AM)
omg thats soooo good i loooveee it! :) |
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