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» Poem: puberty
puberty
written by i_love_sandy
04:35 PM 10/9/04
omg i hate puberty
omg its not pretty
omg i already went through
omg its nasty too


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by _ . cherry bliss . _ (10-9-2004 - 05:01 PM)
I know what you mean =_= Pubery sucks...

by Trapezium (10-9-2004 - 07:28 PM)
you're 11... you don't know the meaning of puberty... you're not even an adolescent... it's just something else to write and moan about in these ridiculous short poems of yours... if you can find something worth writing about... and write a good poem about it... then I'll praise you... otherwise I'll moan like a prick... over 100 poems and you still have the poetic genius of a toddler...

by genuinely_fake (10-9-2004 - 07:37 PM)
hahaahahahaah r u really 11???? i swear u said "i lready went through"(puberty)?? hahahaha u fukin idiot!!!i agree with khano, u shud really learn how to write some poems that are actually WORTH READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by (anonymous) (10-9-2004 - 09:24 PM)
ok 2 things first of all, if ur 11 u seriously have nooooo clue wut puberty is dude second of all, i read some of ur other poems and don't u think ur a little obsessed with kahno? hello, guys feel suffocated if ur that clingy!!!!!

by hells_angel (10-9-2004 - 10:46 PM)
woah first of all 11 year olds dont have puberty until they are about 13! and second of all i think no wait i kno that yur a tade bit obsessed with sandy! thirdly yur 11 and dont know the true meaning of what love is like! and forht of all next time you have something worth writing and worth reading put it up here and not some stupid shit like this because trust me when i say this NO-ONE WANTS TO HERE OR READ ABOUT SOME STUPID CHILD GOING THROUGH PUBERTY!!!! ITS SIC MAN JUST SIC!!!

by destroyed_one (10-10-2004 - 01:12 AM)
hello i_love_sandy yur poem scares me but its awesome and you are a little obsessed with this sandy kahno guy and i feel sry for him sry lol bye

by Genocide Reaper (10-10-2004 - 03:50 AM)
Besides me comending you on getting that much attention, and apparantly being hated. Which is a great honor... I would also say to these people who say nooo way to you hitting puberety at that age is full of shit. I hit it at 10... But still.. Not a good read.. And the fact you are a kid obsessed with sandy is sort of natural because he's obviously a lot older than you. And thus you being young, frail, and innocent, of course you would be attracted to him, but the suicide threats and constant pushing for a guilt trip shows me, just how young females start out insane.. Hey, your idea of how to win him back, has been done way before you thought of it. I suggest you go into the opposite direction before you end up in a fucked up relationship with a drug addict after you pissed off the only good man you might ever have found. Thats what I see in your future if you continue upon the path of Spite, obsession, and self depression.

by _ . cherry bliss . _ (10-13-2004 - 06:33 PM)
Listen, you guys, stop being mean to her. She has hit puberty, and I would know because she is one of my bestest friends in the world. Second, Sandy's been using and abusing her emotions for awhile now, cheating on her and going on an abrupt on/off relationshipwith her before he dumped her. I'm not saying Sandy's the only one to blame, but... Yeah xD Also, that 'ur 11 you cant have puberty hahahaha!!!!1111!!11!!1!!!1!!!!!!1!!!!111!111!!!!!!! ' comment is shit. I started the world of puberty when I was seven. Also, if you're gonna flame someone, learn grammer.

by SilverlineKai (10-17-2004 - 04:15 AM)
I hit puberty at 10 lol. Oh Kahno your taking after me bro getting all this girls with an obsession for you.

by SilverlineKai (10-17-2004 - 04:18 AM)
p.s. you get thru poems like a fat bitch gets thru cream cakes.

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