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» Poem: Just you.
Just you.
written by NirvanaGirl23
05:32 PM 10/10/04
I saw you today,
i thought i was over you.
but its obvious this feeling wont go away.
i wish i could tell you,
but i kinda think you know.
i wish you would tell me,
but i dunno if you know.


those blue eyes are irrestible,
i guess thats what makes me feel
so attached to you.
maybe its the way, you act like my brother.
or maybe its just we have so much in common!

probably the day, i painted your nails pink!
was the day i started to think.
i let go of him, and thought of you.
but now i dont want anyone else.

just you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
haha, its not that good, but i love it cause it is like "me and him" poem, haha, dont ask about the pink nail polish!! hahahha, mm beach, haha, good times!

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» Comments / Feedback
by blood drinker (10-10-2004 - 05:33 PM)
i like it...i have the same feeling but i have a b/f lol

by Gothic_Devil (10-10-2004 - 05:38 PM)
not bad if had that feeling before and i still do

by blackwolf (10-10-2004 - 05:47 PM)
i like it, i can relate to it.

by deadskoolgrl (10-11-2004 - 02:32 AM)
how i uset o feel for someone I love it!!! very awesome!!

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