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Give You Up
written by Morbid Angel07:23 PM 10/10/04Why
Won't
You
Let
Me
Let
Go.
Why
Do
Yo
Keep
Me
Holding
On
For
So
Long.
You
Know
My
Emotions
Are
Weak
So
Why
Do
You
Stop
Me
Being
Strong.
I'm
Trying
To
Pull
Away.
You
Have
Become
My
Day.
My
Life
And
My
Night.
Why
Won't
You
Let
Me
Give
You
Up
Without
A
Fight? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I like doing these sometimes, they're easy to get the point across. But they suck...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mystic 1 (10-10-2004 - 07:32 PM)
| it doesn't suck it's really good. and that's a cool way of writing |
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