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Lead bullet
written by The grey raven08:56 PM 10/11/04Click, bang
Time stands still
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I feel an almighty blow to my neck
What just happened?
I cough
A thin stream of blood flows
From my mouth onto my top
My legs buckle
Slowly I drop onto my knees
And land face down on the ground
My death |
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I think this is shit
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cheesepuff (10-11-2004 - 09:01 PM)
| it is the shit, i could imagine u actually dying |
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