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» Poem: All I'm choked up to be.
All I'm choked up to be.
written by Open_Until_4Am
11:58 PM 10/13/04
Oh Mommy.
Sorry I couldn't make you proud.
I finally came to see that you were just like me.
I don't get it?
Why did you rise the bar up so high for me?
Did you want me to make you unhappy?
Some sick games you play.
I'm out of control again.
When I tell you my master plan.
What a joke it is to you.
I don't want to go to college.
I'm not like the other kids in town.
Maybe you should trade me off.
Get someone who can do all the things you never did.
But I'm sorry.
That I'm letting this get the best of me.
I'm sorry that I'm what I'm going to be.
But if I made myself in to everything you want.
Tell me what's left for me?
But regrets and misery.
Sorry this is all I'm choked up to be.
Disapointment to you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
What I feel about my mom and what she wants from me. College.No I don't see that. I told her how I feel about it. She told me that what I want may never happen I'm better off going to school.

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by maggot445 (10-14-2004 - 12:03 AM)
I know how you feel... I like your poem

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