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Dedicated poem 4 i_love_sandy
written by Lovely_Suicide
12:15 AM 10/15/04
As i stare down at a life that has been lost
My tears begin to turn to frost
A dear girl i would of liked to get to know
But now she's gone; Gone below
As my heart feels with mourning
It slowly turns to morning
Holding deaths flowers near her freshly digged grave
Knowing i could of talked to her maybe she could of been saved
Dressed in sorrow black
Strength is what i lack
I just can't go on
Knowing now that she's gone
Never to see another day
I wish their could of been another way.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
:(I feel responsible we were talking and now she's dead i was hoping we could be friends now i know it's impossible

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» Comments / Feedback
by NirvanaGirl23 (10-15-2004 - 12:36 AM)
I'm sorry, :-( LauRen

by Mars_Phoenix (10-16-2004 - 12:08 PM)
man..that is fucked up:(

by Genocide Reaper (10-21-2004 - 05:29 AM)
Don't buy into it. I doubt she did it, and if she did. It was meant to be.

by Morbid Angel (10-24-2004 - 08:03 PM)
she didn't, look at her latest poems. "they said she'll live"

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