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» Poem: Tear Me Up
Tear Me Up
written by Mars_Phoenix
04:20 PM 10/15/04
Baby tonight we'll trash this house,
And pull floorboards apart with our hands,
Smash these windows and let the world look in,
I'll punch this mirror that hurts you so,
Crunch the glass into my hands
This reflection of the past will hurt you no longer.

Empty my mind with your curiousity,
Good intentions and entangled bodies,
With every kiss I see you,
I see you see me,
And with every wave
I crash against the rocks,
Lying on a bed in the midst of a storm,
Tear me up baby,
Tear me up.


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» Comments / Feedback
by bleeding black tears (10-16-2004 - 05:10 AM)
love it definately, but you know i dont quite get it.

by Mars_Phoenix (10-16-2004 - 11:17 AM)
briefly its to do with sex, but alot more lol.

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