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Me On Suicide
written by Mars_Phoenix12:01 PM 10/16/04Fuck all this self-loathing pathetic weak bullshit
I hear you all spout out every 3 seconds,
I want to fucking smack your head off the concrete everytime I hear it,
Why won't these words get through not even a bit?
Most of you are barely mid-teens and have no idea,
So the purpose of it all i'll try and make clear,
"oh everyone hates me" Well with that weak attitude no doubt they will,
"omg im so sorry im gonna cut myself" - Wtf is this arrogant "i need attention" bullshit?
So my friend he climbed up the science building,
Said he can't take all this pain anymore,
He was gonna jump it was all too much too sore.
Yeah sure,
Thats why the cops talked him down,
And now he's got a good job and feeling fine,
Yet back then he used to wine all the time,
Cause no one gave him the attention he craved,
So they got him some help and some time to himself.
And he was 18 years old,
Someone who had lived and tasted
What the world truely had to offer
Someone who had no self-belief,
Who thought everything he turned out was worthless;
His sister was raped,
His dad took a bite on the bullet,
But you really think he'd take his life instead
Of living it to the fullest because its a gift we're given,
And all you winers you better grow up and listen,
If you do it to yourself it'll be your life you are missing. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this will no doubt offend alot of people; but lets be honest it HAD to be said and if you wanna shout at me and call me wotever - then that is cool.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Acoustic Shadow (10-16-2004 - 04:16 PM)
| Amen! I used to be suicidal, but I just needed help. Now I'm happy, and I have lots of friends...Everytime someone says they're gonna kill themselves, I have one of two reactions: I pity them, or I get annoyed... |
by chocoholic22 (10-17-2004 - 02:03 AM)
| YES YOU FUCKIN ROCK!!! My friends talk about killing themselves, but they are just starving for attention, you know it when you call em on it. the ONE friend i had doubts if she would make it thru high school just finally listened and got that shes pitying herself for no reason, and people DO like her. so if you think no one likes you, but people keep sayin they do, LISTEN! AND THANX MARS PHEONIX WHOEVER YOU ARE! |
by chocoholic22 (10-17-2004 - 02:05 AM)
| damnit i spelled phoenix wrong.... my mistake |
by Mars_Phoenix (10-17-2004 - 02:24 AM)
| lol...yeah thanks guys, i was really ...angry when i wrote this, maybe i came off a bit harsh but, its just that most people who write about it dont understand themselves, they havent even begun to discover who or wot they are and they start to say "im gonna kill myself" its such a sad waste |
by diamond_gloss (10-18-2004 - 02:39 PM)
| Nicely said fras, i know who ya talkin bout and u said it well. good poem mofo!!!!!!!! luv it...wats new. m xxx |
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