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» Poem: -Suicide Note.-
-Suicide Note.-
written by Lovely_Suicide
07:23 AM 10/17/04
I sit here letting this blood pour

Wanting to die was always the chore

But now i know i've won

All because i had come undone

Knowing i will never be missed

That was all part of this twist

Suicide has taken me

Anyone who see's my body would agree

Blood spilt on these usual pages

It will dry for ages

Before someone will see it

It's what i've got to admit

Goodbye to everyone who hated me

That didn't care if i lived or died

Don't care if you think i've lied

At least now i'm free.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I no this isn't good but i wrote this on a site without thought or an idea i ddint know where i was heading with it so yeah thats how i make some of my poems cuz sometimes i just wanna write but dont no wat to write about

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» Comments / Feedback
by blackzeventeen (10-20-2004 - 07:23 AM)
its so sad for you to feel that way....yet...jst like you, i felt so unglued to the world....and it seems like ending it all up is the only solution....but still i want to hold on...to let them feel that i dnt need them to keep me from breathing

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