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» Poem: Things ARENT better.
Things ARENT better.
written by NirvanaGirl23
05:13 PM 10/17/04
what if i was her?
but me. but better.

What if i was older,
you were younger,
things were better.
i was better.

what if you loved me.
she hated you.
we were in love.

But we arent,
and she is.
things arent good.

Things arent better.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
My poems are getting worse and worse, you might see a break from me, sorry if there was any disapointment. but still LEAVE A COMMENT TO LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!
Love, LauRen

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by Mars_Phoenix (10-17-2004 - 05:48 PM)
its cool

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