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God Is Listening (MurderPoem)
written by Mars_Phoenix
07:11 PM 10/19/04
A messenger wearing only his skin
His eyes are peep-holes to the world
That took him in and nurtured his desire
To break it apart.

He'll send a message to the hierarchy in their high tower,
God is waiting,
God is waiting,
God is waiting;
FOR ME.

He wants to listen but maybe he's dead?
I don't care I don't know I don't need self-esteem,
He won't listen cause he's already dead - I know.
Mastering my self-conception what a great SHOW!

With this axe i'll climb this mountain
Carve your face into this palm and
Preach the word of a fallen hero,
Preach the word of a puppetering lie.

I'll carry you home if you let me,
Oh i'll carry you to bed if you let,
Oh i'll love you with paint if you let me;
And your voice it sounds...
Like pain.

YOU,
YOU MOTHERFUCKER,
YOU,
WJY DID I DIE TODAY
YOU,
YOU *insane noise*
STRAIGHT TO THE SUICIDE OF MY HEART!

God is listening,
God is listening,
God is listening,
God is listening,
God is listening;
NO MORE.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a song i wrote in like 5 mins, kinda fucked up. very heavy.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (10-19-2004 - 11:39 PM)
I love it

by xxfallenxx (10-20-2004 - 01:59 AM)
Love it. -Nods.-

by Acoustic Shadow (10-20-2004 - 09:39 PM)
I would SO listen to that! lol...:D

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