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Love Christ
written by Genocide Reaper
09:52 PM 10/19/04
Do YOU! love the lie! do you follow Christ! do you wish he was alive! do you want to save your soul! give into a conforming control!? You are worthless, you are dead! you are something no one should place inside a young childs head! Come on martyr! lets see your hands! what do you have to say! you are the part of the mind I want to cut out! disect a story and repel the evil lore of a manys Crucified glory! not so bad, just really sad that he controls people after death, people he dubbed sheep, people he uses as slaves! Christ could have been the Devil! Look at his vanity! the favorite sin! compareing himself to GOD! You were shocked to hear my words, but at least I question a Mortals works! I guess our next savior will be a steel worker right!? Will he too walk on water?!! Time for love the lie, time to cry, time to break down and sell your soul to preachers for Gold, evil Messiah! Self savior, money maker, life taker, stripping you of your Rights, rapeing your faith, takeing everything in great haste, don't you LOVE TO SEE YOURSELF A WASTE! Now kiss yourself goodbye! you sold your soul for a LIE! now bow down praise a Wooden cross and a plastic Messiah! Grave digger, Water walker, money taker, life stealer, Pay the preist for entry to heaven, bow down and confess your deeds, so he can laugh behind your back, now call out to the Shepard yes. Scream Master as you begin to throw money into the plate faster, but just before you die you'll be reminded of the first commandment and God will send you to Hell to die eternal. Maybe he was something I'm not seeing, but I just think he was a Human fucking Being. Not a God, not a Messiah, just a man with a Plan to survive and preach his Faith. Now I preach my own as I listen to the bell ring. Funeral bells, churck bells, the symphony of Hell calling out to sheep, cattle, christians, faithful in a martyr, Love me hate me, its all the same, you can't change it, its what I feel.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
That kid fuled my fire when she posted that shit to my poem about the Truth in Christians trying to control every little thing. Its the truth, I'm sorry if you don't like the fact that the Mainstream religion wants to control and change everyone until they rule the world.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Mars_Phoenix (10-19-2004 - 10:18 PM)
People that preach their beliefs and force them onto you ex. "you will go to hell if you dont believe in the Lord" - they need to be taken out back and shot in the head. As far as being your own God, thats true to some extent. You can act as God and do as you please, but in doing so your breaking with the rules and laws of society and will be forced to pay their punishment - Such is anarchism. "Evil is a point of view. God kills indiscriminately and so shall we. For no creatures under God are as we are, none so like Him as ourselves." - Lestat. This concerns vampires, but isn't this within our power to do so if we wished to pay the consequences? Nice work dude.

by (anonymous) (12-11-2004 - 05:31 AM)
you will never rule the world your religion fucking sucks. .get over hating cristians not all of us preach about it your a total hipocryte

by somethingcorporate (12-28-2004 - 09:09 AM)
you fucking dolt. what the hell is wrong with you i have never seen a church try to control people except for the holy rollers, and there's not a lot of them. you should get raped up the ass by a bunch of obese 90-year-old men and fucked with chainsaw just like in your poem. you stupid fucked-up cunt. Jesus is the shit, He kicks fucking ass. all of your poems are disgusing. i don't know how anyone can come up with fucked-up shit like that or how anyone can think it's "beautiful". you don't know anything about christianity, obviously, since everything ur saying is a fucking lie. fuck you. die.

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