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» Poem: Our Father
Our Father
written by Lovely_Suicide
10:36 AM 10/20/04
Our Father,
Who art in heaven,
Hallowed be Thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come,
Thy Will be done,
On earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread,
And forgive us our debts,
As we also have forgiven our debtors.
And lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil.


- Matthew 6:9-13


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
im just sharing prayers ok im not forcing any1 into my religion

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» Comments / Feedback
by maledeth (10-20-2004 - 07:41 PM)
Hmm......wickedly comedic...hahahahaha! A Joke, these lies.

by Genocide Reaper (10-20-2004 - 08:59 PM)
Look, I don't really have problem with you. But you obviously don't see that you "are" forceing it. Because a Copied Prayer is poetry. Hince, this is a poetry page. Why dont' you write your own Prayer. Then you can share it all you like.

by Trapezium (10-27-2004 - 11:10 AM)
If you wish to share a prayer, share your own. Why copy something written by a fictional character? Show the world your skll and write your own. xgirl did, why can't you? She has few poems, you have hundreds, surely you could do something as simple?

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