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Taking your knives.
written by NirvanaGirl2301:12 AM 10/22/04im searching for that note,
that you wrote not long ago.
Im looking for that feeling,
the one i like to feel.
im asking for permission,
to take your knives away.
im wanting more attention,
from boys i dont know.
i need some re-collection,
of what happened long ago. |
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I dont know, i like this one, pretty good for writers block? the last one sucked, but read it anywho. this poem might be easy to understand for some of you, and harders for others. i dunno. Leave Comments Please though, evem if it is critisim, just tell me how i can improve my poems or something, i am VERY open to ideas :-D LauReeen
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