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The Thoughts Of A Teenager At 01:10
written by Morbid Angel12:14 AM 10/23/04The first thought going through my head is what will happen tomorrow,
Seeing him with open arms, maybe this will end my sorrow.
But I'm not sure if it'll work out perfect,
I'm not sure if this guy is really worth it.
To meet him in 10 hours but I don't know what for,
Don't know if he's just a friend or if he wants more?
Another thought is what to wear because I want him to be impressed,
I want him to look at me and like the way I've dressed.
On the other hand he might be with me just because of the way I look,
In my heart I need some love and looks just aren't enough.
My third but not my final, is how I feel inside.
Knowing that I love him, I'm just about to die,
Feeling so weak but he's so strong,
He was a power over me and giving him that was wrong.
My fourth is how I need to sleep, rest my sleepy mind,
Explore my thoughts in the form of a dream and see what I find,
Maybe it'll be about him and me together,
But it might be a nightmare that goes on forever.
My fifth is what I say to him when I meet him by the gate,
Don't know if I hug him, don't know what I say,
This time I'll make it happen again,
today will be the day.
My sixth and last is not about suicide,
it's not about cutting or pain inside,
it's about love and what I'm feeling now,
A feeling so strong that it holds me down.
But it's so nice because I'm floating high,
So in love with my perfect guy |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (10-23-2004 - 05:17 AM)
| embrace the feeling, it doesnt always last, and if it does ever end, dont be sad, because there are so many other people in the world who love you |
by (anonymous) (10-23-2004 - 04:27 PM)
| Your poetry is great, you clearly have some considerable talent for it. However, its all so.....depressing and dark. Teenage angst etc.. It doesn't spoil it, but not everything you write needs slit wrists and cutting in it. |
by Morbid Angel (10-24-2004 - 11:03 AM)
| "My sixth and last is not about suicide,
it's not about cutting or pain inside,
it's about love and what I'm feeling now,
A feeling so strong that it holds me down.
But it's so nice because I'm floating high,
So in love with my perfect guy"
Thats not about cutting, for once. |
by xonethousandtearsx (10-24-2004 - 08:31 PM)
| I love this poem. You are very talented!! |
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