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» Poem: Chinese water torture
Chinese water torture
written by The grey raven
08:33 PM 10/23/04
drip*drip*drip
What the hell is this?
drip*drip*drip
I can stand it
drip*drip*drip
Oh come on!
drip*drip*drip
Ok this is so stupid!
drip*drip*drip
Getting a bit annoyed now!
drip*drip*drip
Why am I tied down?
drip*drip*drip
Is it just me or is the noise getting louder?
drip*drip*drip
Really annoyed now
drip*drip*drip
Can't stand it anymore!
drip*
no
drip*
NO
drip*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!


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I think its shit!

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» Comments / Feedback
by crazybitch (10-23-2004 - 08:54 PM)
well done kay, another good one! U2U me when u get a chance, cya monday

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