» Poem: *_Alone_* |
*_Alone_*
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx11:49 PM 10/23/04As black tears run down my face
I look around at this abandoned place
This place I once called my home
But now I'm here, all alone
All alone without a friend
Hoping that my life will soon end
I hate the way I feel tonight
Because I know I need you in my life
Letting the tears dry on my cold skin
I feel something breaking deep within
Hidden within the depths of my soul
Remembering everything I once was told
"I won't let you go this time, I truely love you,"
As I believed I wondered too
Can I trust this person whom Ii lvoe so much?
The one who knows I need his touch? |
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Dedication: My ex, Kevin Beaubien [ View xxxvampire_loverxxx's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 399 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (10-24-2004 - 01:51 AM)
awesome. got hurt by a kevin? yeah me too. sux don't it? i've got quite a few poems that i silently dedicated to him. great poem. keep up the good work. |
by Crazy_Sweet (10-24-2004 - 03:42 AM)
Yes. Guys are heartless jerks. Axactly how i feel. i give it a 9. |
by xonethousandtearsx (10-24-2004 - 04:20 AM)
great job on this poem. I love it. |
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