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666 Words To Tell You I Love You
written by Morbid Angel06:40 PM 10/24/04When I look into your eyes, I see a deep sea blue, Everytime I see the sea it reminds me of you.
When I touch your soft face with my hand, I feel a warmth so true, Everytime I feel warm I remember all the things you do.
When I feel you next to me, your warm hands against my skin, I know that I do love you so, in life, in death, in sin.
These are my six hundred and sixty six words to remind you how I feel, this is like a fairy tale, I hope it always remains unreal.
When hand in hand we walk in rain, sheltered by your love, here we stand, together as one, a blessing from above.
Although the number is of the beast, this love I feel is not, for once this is my perfect life, everything I need I've already got.
Forever yours, in life or death, I'll do anything you please, for I do love you more then life, I'll drop down to my knee's.
I've fought for what is holding me, I nearly died to make you mine again, but now I see that it was worth all the bleeding and the pain.
Looking back on words I wrote, I know I was a fool, killing myself for your love was only making the pain hurt more.
But then you came, took it away, this time you'll never leave me here, I know this time you'll stay.
I'll never worry again about falling in love, because I already have what I forever need, I proved to all that I was strong, I proved that you were meant to be with me.
I know my words might not be the best, and I know they could never be right, because the only way to tell you this is prooving why I cried.
To make you see I love you so much, I wrote six hundred and sixty six ways, ways to love you and ways to cry, ways to spend the rest of my days.
I could never run out of love because it's always in my heart, I don't want to scare you off because it would tear me apart.
I'm trying so hard but I don't know, if these words will tell the truth, I'm trying to prove the love I feel, something so right could only be you.
Now we're at four hundred and one, just a couple more hundred to go, maybe you will see when I am done, the things I've always wanted you to know.
Do you think you could love me, and return the words I've said? For once in so long, I've forgot the memories of wanting to be dead.
It because of you that I don't bleed, because you were the reason I did, you were what I need.
The only thing my razor will do is what it is for, not for cutting or throwing against the door, because of you, because I have you, it'll be like this forever more.
511 now, just a few more to go, I'm running out of space to tell you, the things I think you should know.
I hope these words add up to enough, not just in numbers but also in love, I hope that now you know why I cried, I hope you know why I need you by my side.
So now we're together it'll be so perfect, I'll prove to you that the tears were worth it, I'll prove to you that the song is worth singing, I'll show you all the happiness you're bringing.
For you I cut, for you I cried, but in this story theres just one but, would you still love me if I died?
This time round it'll be the best, I told you 11 months ago that it wasn't over yet.
I need you, do you need me? Will you be what I need you to be? love you! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Woah that was hard :P 666 exactly...love you chris xxx
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mad tears (10-24-2004 - 06:43 PM)
| ...woah...i love it...you show alot of affection for him |
by TranquilityIsAnIllusion8 (10-24-2004 - 07:01 PM)
| That was amazing. i love it |
by (anonymous) (10-24-2004 - 07:45 PM)
| Actually there's 668. You misspelled 'everytime' twice. When you space it like it's supposed to be ('every time') you get 668 hun. Bye. |
by Morbid Angel (10-24-2004 - 07:49 PM)
| oh so very picky...well lah de dah! Don't call me hun if you're going to insult my poems :P Who are you anyway? xx |
by berber106 (10-24-2004 - 08:51 PM)
| i think it is really great good job email me some more of your poetry plz berber@aol.com |
by berber106 (10-24-2004 - 08:52 PM)
| im sry it is berber106@aol.com |
by teddyomnicon (10-25-2004 - 03:12 AM)
| your good mate, kudos to the extreame here |
by Queen of the ravens (10-25-2004 - 03:49 AM)
| totally awesome. you must love this guy alot. i hpoe it works out for you babe. |
by chocoholic22 (10-25-2004 - 04:15 AM)
| damn, i cant believe someone actually went thru and counted, just to make sure you were right. they should take your word for it, your poem fuckin rocks! i hope that chris guy appreciates that crazy-awesome effort you made! i salute you. |
by Morbid Angel (10-25-2004 - 06:35 PM)
| thanks everyone for the comments and so on, it got the poem to number one w00t! hehe xx |
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