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» Poem: This Is My Suicide Note...
This Is My Suicide Note...
written by Morbid Angel
05:48 PM 10/25/04
I don't wanna tell my mum not to cry,
Don't wanna say she won't miss me when I've died,
Because she probably would, and you all know that deep inside,
And if you really don't, it'll be the next thing that you find.

I'm not killing myself because lifes a bitch,
Or because my relationship is hanging on by a single stitch,
I'm killing myself because I'm so tired of this.

I don't wanna know if mummy doesn't love you,
You'd probably keep it to yourself if these things were true,
I know you wouldn't do it anyway, you haven't got the guts to go through.

So mummy I never meant to hurt anybody,
Daddy I'm so sorry,
Sister I hope you find me,
And I hope you watch me bleed,
Tell my boyfriend I love him,
And I never meant to sin,
This is a basic suicide note,
This is what you're all feeling,
But please stop crying,
you've got your life ahead of you,
Childhood is for living and not dying,
Believe me 'cause it's true :)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm so tired of people writing these "suicide notes" because they suck and they mean fuck all, and most of them are n00bs who want attention.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (10-25-2004 - 06:06 PM)
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP Well said m'dear, I only ever wrote one suicide note, and that time I did actually try to kill myself. *rolls eyes*. Almost all of the new kids have a "suicide note" in their first few poems, at least mine wa spost the 200 poem mark. meep, sad people

by (anonymous) (10-25-2004 - 06:55 PM)
hey your foot note isnt true im a person on this site and if you have to know my user name is 'the real folk blues' i have writen a suicide note, no5t to get attaton but because it was something i had stuck in my mind ansd if i didnt get it out i WOULD have really killed my self out of the wonderment of life beyond deathnot to get attetion

by Morbid Angel (10-25-2004 - 07:16 PM)
No I meant all the n00bs that write them pretty much all the same etc, no offence meant...

by migitraffe (10-30-2004 - 10:31 AM)
these notes dont seem real, wen ur gonna die, u write a letter, not sum sappy poem. The letter is important, its the last links of comunication your family will ever have with you, reading your thoughts and worries

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