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innocence
written by i_love_sandy04:47 PM 10/26/04I seem to remember
those times so delicate
so great so fun
what happened here
i seem to remember
drinking soda with friends
so beautiful was she
what happened here
I seem to remember
being with her still
just talking bout times
what happened here
I seem to remember
when i was young again
having fun so innocent
what happened here
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what happened |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
back from the hospital but now i have a stomache flu. i barf everything i eat. cool. lol. i also remember when i wouldnt stop chanting space cows a couple years back when i loved playing spyro.....SPACE COWS!!!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (10-27-2004 - 01:02 AM)
| straight edge piece of shit... |
by Trapezium (10-27-2004 - 11:16 AM)
| lol, anon, she's only 12, a few years ago and that would make her nine, were you a druggy and/or alcy when you were that age? |
by SilverlineKai (10-28-2004 - 01:02 PM)
| I know what happened ^^^ he got a brain. |
by deadeyes (10-29-2004 - 10:21 AM)
| you shouldn't really judge her poems like that they may not be great to you but to someone else they may mean alot how would you feel if some stupid ppl started insulting you wrok you wouldn't like it theres no need to call it shit all you have to say is this poem isn't to my taste not this some really crappy crap crap try and be resonable if she is in hospital you should feel sorry for her not just swear and bad mouth her i read her other poems and some of the comments there where you ppl make me sick i've been in her sittuation its hard to stop loveing someone and if she feels these poems mean something to her then i wouldn't put her down it will make her feel worse and next time she will most proberly die |
by SilverlineKai (10-29-2004 - 08:54 PM)
| umm dickhead, we have reason to hate her poetry, if you knew her and you knew everything we know then you would understand, fucking retard. |
by Morbid Angel (10-29-2004 - 10:35 PM)
| Lol, how long did it take for the doctors to realise you weren't actually dead? |
by i_love_sandy (10-30-2004 - 02:22 AM)
| they realized it just took em forever to save me |
by Trapezium (11-2-2004 - 04:59 PM)
| Alex, if you're a flatliner for over 3 hours, no matter where you live, they'll stop trying to rescuscitate(sp?) you. Explain that, bitch!
The comments on her poems were perfectly ok. See you say you've been in her shoes, you must be a bit of a dickhead then. You've pretended to die, tore up someones life then had 4 "only loves" in less then a week? |
by fuzzypunkhat (11-7-2004 - 06:03 AM)
| and if kahno or whatever his name is dislikes you and doesnt care so much he would go away and stop clinging on to you to annoy you so you go back to him because he makes you feel bad. lol. nice poem. i like :) |
by Trapezium (11-7-2004 - 12:23 PM)
| LMAO, like I would want Alex, hello I got Alicia. |
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