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» Poem: Loyalty is the best policy
Loyalty is the best policy
written by Genocide Reaper
03:44 AM 10/28/04
I'm floating, and I can hear angels singing a song, this all just seems very fucking wrong. My friend, will you be well? Everyone has betrayed you, everyone but me. Now I'll stand and, do what half of me thinks is right, I'll fight for my brother. Fight for my opininated blood brother. Not to be pulling some down, off of number nine cloud, but I can't do anything else but fall as I see what has been, and I mean all. I can feel the cool air sweeping around me, trying to cleanse me of all my sins and I can't seem to let it take them away, I'll have to suffer for my sins, its this time, no end. I'm going to do what I think is best, even if I fail this fucked up test. I'm looking at you now my God. With blank eyes, feel this Lord see me how I am. Loyal to my friends, and loyal to you. But, if I have to chose you or to stay and aid some one in need.. I'll meet you later. Its good to see you though. Just remember everything Iv went through. I'm falling down, the rope around my neck has been pulled tightly, strangled by my own honorful commitments, the last Hero has taken a dive for his Vow. In death to God I shall bow, even if I'm cast back into the past to relive this shit all over again. Banish me if you will, but for this I would kill. I guess I can't understand the concept of life being truely important without at least one true friend. So, just bring the end, and me and him will fight to the death. With our honor, slipping farther, our fight, dwindleing as he rush head first into enemy fire. Completly brave. We had always refused to be slaves, even it took us to our graves. Now my family, and other friends are wondering why I didn't turn back. Because no one understands when you give into fearful attacks, you lose what you've worked so hard for. Pride. My precious loyalty is more to me than any of you, and I know its sad, but, I cannot leave a friend to die alone. I can't walk through those gates with out my bro.


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I want you to read this, and observe this. Its worth it. We should all be this way.

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» Comments / Feedback
by maledeth (10-28-2004 - 04:01 AM)
Yes! Loyalty is something, isn't it? Too fucking bad paranoia gets the best of us sometimes, though....I say fuck 'em all, still.

by dacode05 (10-28-2004 - 11:21 AM)
putting away ur pride seems to lead to losing dignity...i define that as putting away ur worth.

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