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One Cut, Three Cuts, Four Cuts, More
written by Morbid Angel03:20 PM 10/28/04One cut, three cuts, four cuts, more,
Starting to feel better now as I stop feeling sore.
Five cuts, Six cuts, seven cuts, eight,
The numbness sets in, not a second too late.
Nine cuts, ten cuts, eleven cuts, twelve,
Feeling dizzy now, losing control of myself.
Thirteen cuts, fourteen cuts, fifteen cuts, sixteen,
Now I'm feeling sick as reality hits me.
Seventeen cuts, eighteen cuts, ninteen cuts, twenty,
I wanted to see blood and I'm seeing plenty.
Twenty one cuts, twenty two cuts, twenty three cuts, twenty four,
Starting to cut deeper, this is my only cure.
Twenty five, twenty six, twenty seven, twenty eight, Twenty nine, thirty, thirty one, thirty two,
My head is empty, only thinking thoughts of you.
Thirty three, thirty four, thirty eight, fifty three,
Losing count now, been cutting too deep.
Seventy six, eighty three, ninty seven, one hundred and five,
Smiling so twisted, loving this knife.
One hundred and five, ninty seven, eighty three, seventy six,
Counting backwards now, hoping my skin will fix.
fifty three, thirty eight, thirty four, thirty three,
Wishing I hadn't done it, theres people who love me.
Thirty two, thirty one, thirty, twenty nine, twenty eight, twenty seven, twenty six, twenty five,
Start hurting now, looking back on life.
Twenty four, twenty three, twenty two, twenty one,
Shouldn't of done this, too late though, I'm gone.
Twenty, nineteen, eighteen, seventeen,
I'm so sorry, I swear I never meant it.
Sixteen, fifteen, fourteen, thirteen,
This is for all the people who've hurt me.
Twelve, eleven, ten, nine,
Letting go of this life, this life that was once mine.
Eight, seven, six, five,
Saying goodbye, to life so unkind.
Four, three, two, one,
Waving goodbye, the moment has gone.
"I'm so sorry and I love you mum,
Chris you mean the world to me,
So sorry for what I've done,
I made a stupid mistake,
I gave up on the life I could of made,
I was too weak,
I gave in to the pain." |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by darktinkerbell (10-28-2004 - 04:02 PM)
| Your poem really got to me, I felt all the cuts up to the hundreds |
by xxxvampire_loverxxx (10-28-2004 - 04:20 PM)
| I love it. It's beautiful. Keep up the good work. ;) |
by Confused_Girl (10-28-2004 - 04:30 PM)
| I loved it, it touched me so deeply like that knife must of done. It was a wonderful poem, keeping writing! |
by Queen of the ravens (10-28-2004 - 05:23 PM)
| that was so deep i felt every cut just like the ones on my arm. |
by xOBlaCkTeaRz_LP (10-28-2004 - 07:30 PM)
| Ill POem i like it its Hot plus good to write about thoughts i write bout my thoughts to or my life laters
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by deadrebel53 (10-28-2004 - 10:00 PM)
| awsome i could feel all the cuts |
by letmewatchyousleep (11-3-2004 - 04:06 AM)
| Its so real. Your writing is so beautiful. For every cut i ever made or will make i will always think of this. |
by Foiazzy (11-6-2004 - 10:42 PM)
| Wow. That's definatelty one of the best poems I ever read on here. Good job. |
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