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Write You
written by Mars_Phoenix08:06 PM 10/28/04Sorry that I couldn't write you
This letter that had so much to explain,
I always wanted you to hear these words,
A pattern written in ink spread out over a thousand moments
In which I tried to link the past to the present.
Sorry that I would never listen
And every step we took led us further away
From each other.
But I need you to know,
I need you more than for show,
Your the girl from Chino;
With skin as soft as snow flakes,
And eyes so blue as Winter blooms. |
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this is crap - ignore
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Acoustic Shadow (10-28-2004 - 08:55 PM)
| This is sooooo not crap! You could just make it longer, but so far, it's very good! :) |
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