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» Poem: Repeating lines to you
Repeating lines to you
written by Lovely_Suicide
06:18 AM 10/29/04
You told me you cared
DONT GO AND LIE TO ME!!!
You told me i would get better
DON'T GO AND LIE TO ME!!!
You told me this would soon be over
DON'T GO AND LIE TO ME!!!

I told you the truth
NEVER BELIEVE A SINGLE THING I SAY!!!
I told you i would soon be gone
NEVER BELIEVE A SINGLE THING I SAY!!!
I told you i never wanted to feel again
NEVER BELIEVE A SINGLE THING I SAY!!!

You acted so angry
DON'T GO AND MESS WITH ME!!!
You acted like i should of been dead long ago
DON'T GO AND MESS WITH ME!!!
You acted like i was the ugliess thing you've seen
DON'T GO AND MESS WITH ME!!!

I acted without seeing
NEVER SAW ME THERE!!!
I acted invisible when you were around
NEVER SAW ME THERE!!!
I acted like i was dying
NEVER SAW ME THERE!!!

Now im dying
YOU DONT EVEN CARE!!!
Now im fading away
YOU DONT EVEN CARE!!!
Now im gone
YOU DON'T EVEN CARE!!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
im letting out sum anger

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by CHAUNTEL (10-29-2004 - 06:39 AM)
HOPE YER NOT GONE I THOUGHT THAT WAS COOL AS -UCK...

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