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Has no1 told u shes not breathing?
written by Lovely_Suicide06:56 AM 10/29/04Has no one told you she's not breathing?
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Haven't you noticed that everyone's staring?
No one seems to be caring
You Broke her heart
Pulled it apart
Now she's dead
Gunshot threw her head
No sympathy goes your way
Look at what see had to pay
No breath escapes her lips
Bloody clothing on delicate hips
You seem just to be walking around
Breaking hearts all over town
You don't seem to realize that she is gone
LOOK AT WHAT YOU'VE DONE!
You Killed her
You broke her
Now no one likes you
Now tell yourself this is true
Your all alone
Now your mine to own
You have me your mind
I'll make sure i'll leave you blind
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Hello i'm your mind giving you someone to talk to
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the lines that have ----------- well the top one is off evanescence hello and the last bit of the poem is off the same bit so uh yeah i like this not the poem the song
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i_love_sandy (10-30-2004 - 02:39 AM)
| i like that evanescence song. me gots it on cd. i love this poem like all the others. dont hurt yourself please! |
by (anonymous) (11-1-2004 - 05:15 PM)
| OOOOOh very nice poem. You did a great job. |
by (anonymous) (11-1-2004 - 05:16 PM)
| OOOOOh very nice poem. You did a great job. |
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