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» Poem: Broken Down, Fallin Apart
Broken Down, Fallin Apart
written by Open_Until_4Am
04:40 PM 10/29/04
Broken Down
Fallin Apart
Listen To The Words
What's Right and What's Wrong
Are You Sure Of Who You've Become
Is This The Life You Wanted Along
The Way Out Is Easy
Right In Front Of you Along
But You Were Blinded By The Light
Oh I'll Be The One There To Tell You It's Alriight
No More Crying Tonight

Broken Down
Fallin Apart
All Is Left, Including Broken Hearts
You Were Happy
A Time Long Ago From Now
I Am Scared Of What I Might Not Have
The Feeling Is Warm, But I Feel Cold
Life Is Ending So Fast
You'll Look To Me, But Will Find Nothing
A Friendship Lost A Time Along Ago

Broken Down
Fallin Apart
Feelings I Will Not Feel
You'll Be Sorry You Didn't Care Like I did
Cause You'll Be Alone Until The Day You Die
I Won't Even Cry
For You Knew What Was Right and What Was Wrong
You Said What You Wanted
I'm Done Listen To Hate


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Friendships should just end. You know they should so why do you look for reasons to keep them going. Pain isn't something anyone needs or wants!

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» Comments / Feedback
by m.nizzle (3-1-2005 - 04:03 PM)
I think this poem speaks the truth I like the way you put it together I like its cool

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