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hey its me
written by i_love_sandy06:57 PM 10/30/04hey its me
my poetry sucks
but if you critisize it
i'll rip out your guts
hey its me
your head will be mine
if you critisize this poem
you little swine
hey its me
i know i'm kinda woa
but hey its a punk
thats what you should know |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
destroyed sweaters is my band. good punk music. if you want to hear some U2U me or just say so in the comments, yeah.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by BubbleButt (10-30-2004 - 07:12 PM)
| I think your poem sux!!! What are lyou gonna do about it??? |
by BubbleButt (10-30-2004 - 07:13 PM)
by Mars_Phoenix (10-30-2004 - 07:49 PM)
| let me hear ur band, i work with lots of bands so i can rate u :) |
by Morbid Angel (10-31-2004 - 07:47 PM)
by Trapezium (11-2-2004 - 05:03 PM)
| YOU have a band??!! hahahaha don't make me laugh. Who writes the lyrics 'cause it definately wouldn't be you. And yeah I'll critiscise this poem as much as I want 'cause it's a bit on the shit side, and I'm not gonna lie and say it's good just for you. 113 poems and you still haven't learnt. yeesh. Go to hell bitch |
by Morbid Angel (11-2-2004 - 10:33 PM)
| Jaha, well said sandy hun x |
by Trapezium (11-3-2004 - 06:43 PM)
| I know that the original slogan for punk was "here's a chord, here's another, and here's another. Now go make a band!" but you're taking that a little too literally.
I've noticed you barely write poems anymore, have you realised how shit they are or have you faked another suicide attempt? |
by fuzzypunkhat (11-7-2004 - 06:00 AM)
| lol theyre just picking on you because they're losers and have nothing better to do except make themselves feel better because they didnt have the common sense when they were younger to attempt things and maybe fake stuff so they could actually know how it is and wouldn't critisize it. i went through it too. a lot of kids do. ive been obsessed and stuff and faked suicidal stuff. YOU GO GIRL |
by Trapezium (11-7-2004 - 12:41 PM)
| How is it common sense to fake a suicide?How is it common sense to guilt trip someine until they feel suicidle? How is it common sense to pretend to be jealous over everything they do. How is it common sense to lie about going out with someone. |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 07:07 PM)
| i dont know anything bout this, but hey, i liked ur poem, some people are just too fuckin serious, which makes them boring, which makes them depressed, theres more to the dark side of life you know |
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