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written by Mars_Phoenix
06:17 PM 11/1/04
Its a one way ticket to the edge of my mind,
I dont know what i was meant to say or do,
all i know is i was a fool for trustin u.
I wish i was so much older so i could see through her lies,
Day by day hour by hour i was forced to swallow this love gone sour,
I wish i was insane so i had a truth which i could sustain,
I realise this but the fact remains,
As the tears fall like rain,
I'll never let go to the fact you burned me so.

Fall on my shoulder you're my angel,
Your my girl but i want to hurl
When i hear your name on the lips of friends,
When i hear your name i get the bends,
When i touch your skin your warmth it sends
a back breaking message called "fuck me chris"
So kiss these lips and let's forget the day after tomorrow,
Cause i'll be gone and never look back,
Leaving you to rest on your laurels.


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note: my name is not chris lol.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Acoustic Shadow (11-3-2004 - 10:51 PM)
Interesting...and yes, I know your name is not Chris...lol...

by Mars_Phoenix (11-4-2004 - 09:23 PM)
yes! i cant be bothered man im totally writing crap these days so im gonna take a break from writing and come back soon:D

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