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Goodbye Lullaby(suicide kinda)
written by Lovely_Suicide10:55 AM 11/3/04Goodbye, Go back to sleep
I won't be here when you wake up
Goodbye, Go back to sleep
Bloody wrists is all you will see
Goodbye, Go back to sleep
A dead body on a bed
Goodbye, Go back to sleep
I won't be breathing
Goodbye, Go back to sleep
Close your eyes
Goodbye, Go back to sleep.... |
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i wrote this in my notepad though i'd share it cuz i like it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hanna_the_used (11-3-2004 - 12:43 PM)
| i love it. so deep,so dark. sleep is the deepest darkest moment of ones life,right next to death. context used well |
by hanna_the_used (11-3-2004 - 12:44 PM)
| i love it. so deep,so dark. sleep is the deepest darkest moment of ones life,right next to death. context used well |
by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 04:02 PM)
| This would be better if you changed the refrain to "yeah yeah yeah." |
by RebelYell (11-3-2004 - 04:14 PM)
by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 07:48 PM)
by (anonymous) (11-6-2004 - 02:41 AM)
| good but not great i know that ir you try just a tiny bit harder you'll make a great poem :) |
by jodedwar (11-6-2004 - 04:19 PM)
| i also like this peom, i love lullaby's being used in darker ways. |
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