» Poem: This is where i like it |
This is where i like it
written by Lovely_Suicide11:05 AM 11/3/04This is where i like it,
In my room everynight,
No one to fight for,
No one to care for,
So im losing my mind,
It's twisting inside,
And i'm alone,
All alone,
In my room,
Facing this doom,
Can't you see?,
The problems i face?,
And i'm falling again,
Looking at this image,
Seeing as it changes,
Proving to me that no ones here,
No one will help me,
No one will love me,
So here i am in my room,
It's where i like it,
Falling apart out of sight. |
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i got a bit of avril lavignes song in my head i forgot what its called bit its coolies [ View Lovely_Suicide's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 444 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 05:05 PM)
We like you in your room too. Please, stay in there. |
by (anonymous) (11-6-2004 - 02:40 AM)
yes i agree with the comment i know u like your room...and thats where u such stay...don't write poems if u don't know how :S |
by ymmat04 (11-27-2004 - 07:03 PM)
by ymmat04 (11-27-2004 - 07:05 PM)
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