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Prayer that wasn't answered
written by Lovely_Suicide05:31 AM 11/5/04She's sitting there
On her knees for the prayer
She's holding her hand's together
Beginning the prayer for an answer
She's chanting the words
And there sits some blackbird's
She tries not to look up
Thinking it was only a stirup
She screams as the floor goes hot underneath her knees
As she looks down and see's a million bodies
She realizes that her prayer will not be answered
Going under and begins to get tortured
She see's that she was feeled with to much hate
To fix her fate. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i like this one kinda i found a different website so now i have more words to rhyme with isn't that great? nah i spose not i like this one to me its like a prayer for something good or to be fixed bit it wasn't answered cuz inside she was black u no death and hate inside her is it that same to you's?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dacode05 (11-5-2004 - 05:58 AM)
| i know all prayers r answered....when u answer them URSELF...all u need is a backbone dear... |
by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 09:11 PM)
| I hope she realizes in time
That poetry doesn't have to rhyme
(in fact, it's often kind of trite when it does) |
by 4got_to_4get (11-5-2004 - 10:41 PM)
| " sometimes i thank god for unanswered prayers Remember when you're talkin' to the man upstairs
That just because he doesn't answer doesn't mean he don't care
Some of God's greatest gifts are unanswered prayers "--garth brooks
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by dacode05 (11-7-2004 - 05:41 AM)
| (also having some reality itsnt really a bad thing) |
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