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Sir,I won't take it anymore
written by Lovely_Suicide05:47 AM 11/5/04Get it in shape,Sir
I'm not your slave
Write it down,Sir
Cause im sure as hell not doing it
Don't think you own me,Sir
My body is my own
Kindly turn around and flee,Sir
Im not giving my sanity up for you
Look into my eyes,Sir
I've been told i'm mean
Turn around,Sir
I wanna see what it's like
Lay down and beg,Sir
You can be my puppy dog now
Place a smile on that face,Sir
Wanna see you burn
Sit down and cry,Sir
So i can stare at you
Beg me to let you free,Sir
I wanna laugh at you
You can let me go,Sir
I won't take it anymore. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dacode05 (11-5-2004 - 05:56 AM)
| finally!!! hit hard sweety...well done |
by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 04:54 PM)
| I THOUGHT IT WAS GOOD HOW ALL THE FIRST LINES ENDED WITH SIR ALSO YOU ARE INTREPID |
by (anonymous) (11-6-2004 - 02:35 AM)
| i get what you are tryin to express but try to put it in better words and there is one more thing in my mind...i think its very annoyin how u keep startin the sentance with sir |
by juliasoul (11-6-2004 - 06:39 AM)
by dacode05 (11-6-2004 - 08:48 PM)
| note:the sentences are ENDED with "Sir". |
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