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» Poem: To mum and Dad
To mum and Dad
written by Lovely_Suicide
07:44 AM 11/8/04
To Mum and Dad,

I loved you both,
I mean it i did,
When your born your supposed to of made a oath,
To love and obey your parents,
But i look at you two,
And think how could i ever love you's?,
When you two always make me feel so much darker then blue,
This letter is what i choose to pursue,
To say i am angry that i live in a broken family,
No Dad around to muck around with,
It makes me so ANGRY!!!,
To know i'll always live inside myself and think that family is but a myth,
It makes me cry,
To see what my life has become,
Always wanting to die,
Always being glum,
Was it meant to be this way?,
I wish this would all just GO AWAY!,
I WANNA STOP CRYING,
And i wanna stop hearing you LYING,
IT WON'T BE ALL RIGHT!!,
DO YOU WANT ME TO KEEP DOING THIS EVERYNIGHT?,
WRITING THESE POEMS?,
Don't you GET IT?,
I DONT WANNA BE THIS WAY,
Thats why i've choosen death,
Look i'm beginning to loss my breath,
Filled with anger and depression,
Why did i have to be in the million?,
Why did YOU MY parents break up?,
why do i have to deal with the gossip?,
I hate you mum and Dad,
I hope your both happy when i'm dead,
Good luck in your fucked up worlds,
Cuz now i don't have to be in it.

From, Your fucked up daughter.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i hate my mum and dad assholes
can sum1 tell me if it needs editing?

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-9-2004 - 01:39 AM)
hi i read your poem and i dont think it needs editing and i feel the same way about my parents. my dad was never there for me and my mom is a drunkie,

by freak (11-27-2004 - 05:34 PM)
i understand my parents are divorced too. my dad thinks i am a slut and i am not so yeah that makes me mad too. yep well i hope you feel better

by justme (12-24-2004 - 08:34 AM)
Let it out.. it was pretty wicked. i know what u mean, my rents are divorced to, and im on the dark side about it. the poems f*en awsum.

by _into_the_darkness_ (1-10-2005 - 08:51 PM)
i had problems with my dad Ill send it to you if you like, your peoms are so real and so good i give you a great big red star coming froma person you dnt no, i do care about you coz i went through the same things XxX

by (anonymous) (1-17-2005 - 09:49 PM)
i feel the same way about my parents

by phillip (1-18-2005 - 06:09 PM)
i know how it feels my parents are apart it sux but you got go on with you life like everyone else.

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