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» Poem: Your eyes.
Your eyes.
written by NirvanaGirl23
09:00 PM 11/9/04
Eyes focused on me,
Wildly spinning for many to see..

But YOUR eyes are different,
They're so unique.
Whats in your eye?
I SWEAR its a fly!!!
NO! How could that be?...

Calm and steady for no one to see..
NO one...BUT me.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i like it. lol dont ask about the fly thing..umm...he has a strange eye..it has something black in it. its something how he was born? i dont know! LEAVE COMMENTS PLEASE!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Schizophrenic_broken (11-9-2004 - 09:02 PM)
lol, thas funny. dudette

by bloodlyvalentine (11-9-2004 - 09:27 PM)
hahahahahaha, thats great man! keep writing!

by bloodlyvalentine (11-9-2004 - 09:28 PM)
i have a whole that looks like a pen mark next to my eye and someone thought i drew it on with a pen til they realized it was an actual whole!!!!!

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