» Poem: Your eyes. |
Your eyes.
written by NirvanaGirl2309:00 PM 11/9/04Eyes focused on me,
Wildly spinning for many to see..
But YOUR eyes are different,
They're so unique.
Whats in your eye?
I SWEAR its a fly!!!
NO! How could that be?...
Calm and steady for no one to see..
NO one...BUT me. |
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i like it. lol dont ask about the fly thing..umm...he has a strange eye..it has something black in it. its something how he was born? i dont know! LEAVE COMMENTS PLEASE! [ View NirvanaGirl23's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 386 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-9-2004 - 09:02 PM)
by bloodlyvalentine (11-9-2004 - 09:27 PM)
hahahahahaha, thats great man! keep writing! |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-9-2004 - 09:28 PM)
i have a whole that looks like a pen mark next to my eye and someone thought i drew it on with a pen til they realized it was an actual whole!!!!! |
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