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Fangs
written by Genocide Reaper03:39 AM 11/14/04| Fangs that sank into my viens, claws that shred by back, fingers that clutch my flesh. Coated in blood, and soaked in sweat, something has changed inside of you, this I know I will not regret. You salted my wounds. Another cut inside of my heart, I'm hurt, as I thirst for more lucious pain. I thrive off of your soul, give me your life, let me take all of it, and be the evils control. Fangs that sink deep into my neck, draining all of which I give. Rage that builds like water around a dam, fires that burn, hotter than Hell. Everything to me. Now. Everything to me, eternity isn't enough, I must have you and all of your trust, as I slip the blade to your throat, I wonder if you want to choke, just to see if you really believe me when I say this to you. Love you, I do. |
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To my love
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| » Comments / Feedback | by pulse_ofthe_maggots (11-14-2004 - 03:50 AM)
| well its no surprise i love this poem!! just like i like every other poem of yours that i have read although this is the first ive actually commented on. i was wondering if i could put some of your poems into my scrap book of quotes and poems though? well i hope you'll give it some thought i swear i will give you the credit for it. anyways get back to me sometime if i can. thanks
*~nicole~* |
by Vamp_Dru_Dollie (11-14-2004 - 04:19 AM)
| I only have one thing to say... woooooooooow.
I loved it! |
by dacode05 (11-16-2004 - 03:55 AM)
| I BELIEVE...but I can't get to you now. |
by BloodshedRose (11-23-2004 - 03:34 AM)
| I wish my fiance loved me like this. Truly beautiful work. |
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