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You Are Nothing, I Am Everything
written by Morbid Angel09:25 PM 11/14/04You're a waste of space telling us that we suck, our poems are stupid but you can go drink your dads cum, now wouldn't that be fun? I don't see you writing anything worth reading so why do you critise what you're seeing? It's up to us if we write about suicide, cutting or bleeding. You wrote your own god damned note, so what the fuck are you going on about? I wish I had a penny for everytime I've thought about chickening out. Some people have problems and suicide seems so grand, you don't seem to have experienced these thoughts so you couldn't understand, if you don't believe me take another good look at my wrists and hands. Yes it does hurt and yes it'll be there always, I might not feel like this all the time but we all have our bad days. So you come along and make them worse, with your stupid and pathetic words, maybe it's time that someone told you what you're worth. Theres only one word to describe you and what you mean to me, and it's Nothing. Thats all you'll ever be. I just noticed you changed your comment so it doesn't look so bad, you're a fucking waste of space and you know what else? You're sad. You must have no life if you just complain about people who want to take theirs, it's not nice to be talked about is it but I guess that fair is fair. You're what I'd call an attention seeking freak, looking at your poems you're talent is very weak. They all say must read but I think I'm ok for now, I'd rather not because fuck knows what they'll be about. Next time take a shot at people who are depressed, maybe take the piss out of goths or the way they dress? Hey I know, why don't you write one about me and how shit I am, go tell your mommy about the mean girl who's not your fan, if your mum wasn't such a whore I'd tell you to tell your dad, but I guess he's not around. You're a hypocritical low life and if you ask me, you're the only one who needs to use a knife. I wish you'd just go all emo and start to wail and cry, or better still why don't you just die?
You
Are
Nothing.
I
Am
Everything. |
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My contribution to the slating of djfoe2003.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (11-15-2004 - 12:19 AM)
| *applauds* Very beautiful. So far Dj, you are out numbered, and out classed. Any final words before you swallow those pills and watch your life pass? |
by Morbid Angel (11-15-2004 - 09:21 PM)
| Someone should u2u him so he can see it. I hate writing for people who don't see it. |
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