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father and I
written by i_love_sandy
02:34 AM 11/16/04
Its so crazy and i cant take it now that dad wants to make me miserable
he said it builds character and that i'll thank him
but where does that make me happy in my life
of course it will make me angry but happy?
I highly doubt that right about now
what character does that build unless its low self-esteem?
he did that to my sister and now look at her!
she is an alchaholic who is in the hospital
and is most likely going to die
whats going to happen to me later on in life
how am i going to die
how am i going to live
will i live will i die
i dont know
but sean its your call now
you die i die
cuz i never break a promise
i am trailing off again


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
dont comment if you have something negative to say! sean says he is gonna take me shoppin to hottopic and buy me anything i want...what a dude!!! he the best. i wanna call him but he is in training and he cant talk for three days cuz he will be in the woods, so. but he said that he will check his emails as soon as he gets back and write me a BIG email:) i wuv him so much!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (11-17-2004 - 04:35 PM)
You've broken promises before, what's stopping you from doing it again?

by mokat1012 (12-5-2004 - 08:13 PM)
stop worrying about sean so much. he will be OK. my dad's already there and he's fine. the worst injury he got was he got his finger jammed in a door. :)

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